Heavy Industrial Rock
Well done on the song. Very well made in terms of feel and melody. Rhythmically, could have used a bit more, as well as dynamically. It's alright you said this wasn't mixed as well as you could, I won't take marks from that but your could have really made this a very Professional Orgasm. Nothing wrong, and if you get even better than this than I would most certainly have to check your music out again in the future.
Cheers!
Thanks for the in-depth review! I really appreciate it.
Mega Intense
That solo. Oh lawd. You obviously spent a lot of time on this, and that's awesome. Great production.
Instrumentalisation
It's good. Not perfect, that's for sure, you probably don't need me to tell you that.
I am making a promise with myself that I would never criticize somebodies voice unfairly as they can and will only get better with time, however, I will say, there wasn't enough variation in melody. The last verse could have been done a lot better, vocally. When the "Distant Serenity" line was sung, I felt a LOT of holding back. There's nothing to lose, rock the mic like it's a casbah.
Bass was not heard enough, and could have been improved dramatically. I'm gonna disagree with the other reviewer, the instruments could have done much more. The guitar was slow and unmoving, not powerful as it could have been.
Lyrically, I'm not a fan of the kind of writing, for personal reasons, but I'll ignore that. The lyrics are well written and recorded, and I will not take marks from that.
However, there is so much room for improvement over a month, I'm gonna have to ask you to redo this in a few months, because I really want to hear it. This could be awesome on this site. Keep up your good work!
PS: If you're looking for a nice mic, Behringer are really great quality and value.
thanks for the review! yeah theres actually a lot more i want to do with it and i just havent yet...and i agree about the not enough variation in the vocal melody...we recorded it yesterday and i was sick as a dog and wanted to go to bed lol...ive got a friend of mine writing a new bass part to it as we speak and seein as he is a bassist can prolly make it more noticable from the guitars...also ill be sure to mix it slightly louder next time around...again thanks a ton for the cconstructive criticism....i really enjoy hearing what others have to say
Nice beat
I like it. Personally, I think it needs a bit more, dynamically (bass should be amplified) but it's a nice little loop.
Thanx man! =) i'll work on it, should be an updated version soon ;) Thanx for the feedback ;)
Nice blend
Didn't know what to expect, but I think I get it now. Sounds like Egyptian Techno mixed with themes of Industrial, if you were to ask me. Dynamics could really help this piece in becoming orgasmic.
Good
Instruments are great. Musically, it probably portrayed what you were going for. I like it, however, I didn't feel there was enough symphonic elements. What I mean is, the instruments are meant to give each other the melody and harmony through the track. I also felt the instruments all played exactly the same thing over each other, just at different octaves, and there wasn't enough harmonization. Another thing is dynamics and panning, which are vastly neglected.
The drumming sounds really nice, and I especially liked the string part near the end of. You have a nice style, and you will definitely get much better in the future. Keep up the good work!
Very nice
This is a very high quality track (both in terms of bitrate and greatness). You know what you're doing, and I'm really getting into it. It feels right. Good job, man!
Unfortunately, the score is holding at about a steady 1 right now, so you may be the only one with that opinion, but no matter! Thanks!
I lol'd
I dunno why, but I did. You're a Pokemon, and this is a masterpiece.
I write music for video games. I also write video games. I am also "Fyaopo" for those who want to know.
Age 28, Male
Paul Rocker
Australia
Joined on 10/2/10
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